Drafting and Planning: Final Draft Class Feedback

Common errors made in our coursework:

• Inconsistency of cover lines from the ones featuring on the front cover to the ones included on the contents page. 
• Contents page information is too much - Long unnecessary sentences/quotes explaining what the story is about. This gives to much insight for the reader, which could lead to them losing interest.
• Sometimes genre is not always obvious.
• Minimum of FOUR original photographs needed - there must also be a difference between them. They cant all be of a medium close up.
• Contents page have a lack of features
• A weekly or monthly magazine will NOT feature an artist promoting a 'new song' or 'new single'