Along
with general class feedback we received on Thursday 26th of January each member
of the class received a short piece of Individual feedback to help
them work on the moving forward with their magazines. I didn’t receive many points as this was my
first draft and the main body of feedback will come when the next version of my
magazine is handed in for marking.
- The font on my contents page
is relatively large and maybe too large on the page. It was also
commented that if I was to make the font smaller than I could add some
more stories.
- The musical Mise-en-scene of
my artist is not fully clear. I could think about how to change this
through props and what my artist is wearing. My teacher didn’t think my
model looks like a pop music artist in the images.
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