What changes am I going to make?

Following receiving general class feedback and individual feedback on the first drafts, I have decided to make some changes to my magazine. This will then add to success of my magazine and the ethos of my magazine will come better together. Well I least hope this will happen.

-         I am going to make my font smaller on the page and I may add some more stories. However this would mean adding more pages then initially intended. I will look back into my research and will make the decision whether or not to add more pages to the 32 already planned.

-         I am going to change my font on my double page spread from size 16 to 8. This is a big change and will mean my article will need extending to fill the page, as the smaller font will not even cover half of the page as I have looked into this.

-    Although I was asked to look at my artists looks again, I have decided not to go ahead with changing what my model is wearing, as I believe my choices are appropriate and it is how I want to present my artist. She is laid back and about original beauty and casual identity as she wants to look ordinary and relatable. 

I am happy with the way my front cover is looking so I have decided to leave it untouched as I believe it presents the exact ethos I want to express and looks aesthetically pleasing.