This is the work I have done this week following the feedback I received, it is not fully finished but it is working progress and has changed since my first draft.
FRONT COVER & CONTENTS PAGE:
I have decided not to change anything on my front cover as I think everything works well together and I received good feedback about its look. I may change some things in the future, maybe after
handing in my final draft in a few weeks.
This is my updated contents page so far. I have added the number stories which i have spoke about above and I have edited some of the original content. On this version I have also changed the two images at the bottom of the page. These are of my secondary artists. They are not my final pick of images but are placed to show an example of my final magazine. I am still working with the colour choice of the text on the images, they are my next step.
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| This was my original draft. |
DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD:
This is my second version double page spread. I have made my article longer, which I spoke about in a previous post. This was because it was too short. I've also changed my font size. I have kept all of the same fonts used previously as they worked well and created a enthusiastic and young look. I have placed a duck egg blue box around my pull quotes, I have got the exact colour from the designed wall behind. I used a tool on Page Plus to do this. This makes the quotes stand out more, as left in just white caused them to become washed out by all the colour and other text, it also separates them more creating a bigger focus.
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| This was my original double page spread design. |
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